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The train-bell chimes,
The bag pipes sing.
March! March! Young lovers fair!
To victory in warfare!

The knights ride on,
Warriors howl,
Go! Go! Brothers in arms!
Raise up your wicked firearms!

The battle’s won,
Though lives are lost.
Weep! Weep! Oh daughters fair!
Your men were claimed, so give your prayer!
©2009 *Wandio
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Not so sure about the name, thus I'm open to suggestions there.

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:iconloofsydobon:
The title fits, though there are lots of ways it could go. "On Your Shield" popped into mind. But, I think the clarion call that the title "Horns of War" calls up fits with the majority of the piece.

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In shadows too deep to see
Maybe there, you will find me
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:iconwandio:
Thanks, I think "Horns of War" as a title is also growing on me as well.

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"My mother used to say to me, 'Elwood, in this world you must be oh so smart, or oh so pleasant.' For years, I was smart, but I would recommend pleasant. You may quote me."
----Elwood P. Dowd

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