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Yet another typographical poem.

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:iconloofsydobon:
Good flow, the spacing is very effecting. It comes across as different voices - or the way thoughts work, just shooting through the head, not necessarily really connected, but still related; or sometimes just repeating when the mind wants to go on.
Well done.

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In shadows too deep to see
Maybe there, you will find me
:jester:
:iconwandio:
Thank you very much! :)

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"My mother used to say to me, 'Elwood, in this world you must be oh so smart, or oh so pleasant.' For years, I was smart, but I would recommend pleasant. You may quote me."
----Elwood P. Dowd
:iconloofsydobon:
Gah. I meant 'effective', but, I think you probably figured that out. :D

--
In shadows too deep to see
Maybe there, you will find me
:jester:
:iconwandio:
Hahah. Yeah, well, more or less.

--
"My mother used to say to me, 'Elwood, in this world you must be oh so smart, or oh so pleasant.' For years, I was smart, but I would recommend pleasant. You may quote me."
----Elwood P. Dowd

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