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Freely drifting through blue sky,
How much I long to be there, too!
So undefined, so free in mind,
No shape to bind as they drift by.

Freedom expressed through faith in shape,
Through faith we bind their images,
binding planes, defining edges,
We make wild things, mouths agape.

But they know that shape is not true,
No castles built up in the sky,
Amorphous, white, and truly free,
I would give my life to join you!

There is nothing mortal allowed
Up in that heavenly realm!
For fear freedom would overwhelm
Mere mortal minds among the clouds!
©2009 *Wandio
:iconwandio:

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DLD --- Cloud Contest

I'm coming out of a major writers block to enter this contest. Wish me luck!

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:iconkendecia:
This is nice. I like it. Good luck to you, alright?

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:iconwandio:
Thank you very much! :D

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"My mother used to say to me, 'Elwood, in this world you must be oh so smart, or oh so pleasant.' For years, I was smart, but I would recommend pleasant. You may quote me."
----Elwood P. Dowd
:iconkendecia:
You are very much welcome.

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~ShortStackStories
=RawEm0tion
~distinctprose
~writingclub
100 Theme Challenge Prog= [link]
My Lit: =http[link]
:iconloofsydobon:
Great imagery. Good luck in the contest. :)

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In shadows too deep to see
Maybe there, you will find me
:jester:
:iconwandio:
Thank you very much! :)

--
"My mother used to say to me, 'Elwood, in this world you must be oh so smart, or oh so pleasant.' For years, I was smart, but I would recommend pleasant. You may quote me."
----Elwood P. Dowd

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